Thursday, February 02, 2006

Revenge-Writing Topic 4

It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which is more important? Why?

knowledge gained from experience and knowledge gained from books both have pro and con. An experience are so practical but can not be shared with other people. Knowledge are easy to get various information in a short time. In consider of merits for our future, I say knowledge gained from experience is more important.

Knowledge gained from experience are so practical that you can appliy the experience to other thing. For example, you have experience staying in France, you can use that experience to be a French language teacher, or an adviser for people who wants to go to France. However its demerits are time consuming and not able to share it with other people because experience is someting that only the person who acutually experiencing it can appriciate.

Knowledge gained from books are easy to get. You can get verious information for brief time by reading books and you can share the information that you got from books with many other people. However its demerit is it is not practical.

The really important thing to chage the world better, we need not just criticizing the situation by a lot of information that you get from books or paperspractical and realistic technique to make good revolution happen. All in all, I would say knowledge gained from experience is more important because it is practical.

27 minitutes!!

3 Comments:

Blogger *fumiko* said...

GOOD JOB!!
I think u will get a perfect on the essay's now. It better than my writing.
Ur vocabulary has improved !!!!
What is the trick?

10:22 AM  
Blogger yoko said...

because I wanted to finish this in 30 minutes, I didn't check the grammer or tense. Now I re-readed, I cannot thank you enough for reading this awful essay...

An experiences are... What was I thinking(確か何も考えずタイプしていた気がする)

3:31 PM  
Blogger yoko said...

At which point in this essay, you get the vocab-improve idea?!

Are you OSEJI-ing???

3:34 PM  

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