Writing Topic 9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communicaiotn amoung friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Television has been widely shared information sourse and entertaining provider. It can give us common topics to talk about with other people, hints to understand what people think, and good issues for family communicaiton. So I disagree to the statement that say television has destroyed communication amoung friends and family.
Watching soup opera give you a common subject to talk about with your friends. School children can share the idea about having a boyfriend or girlfrien, or putting a make up the way people do in the soap opera that they are talking about. You can feel more conected with your friends by talking the same subject.
Watching TV program with children make their parents know how their children think about what is going on in their lives and their future. Parents can see how their children grew up by watching them give a sympathy or angry to a criminal in news and see what they like by watching them how to react to some sports program or TV commercial.
Watching TV program give a parent a good issue to talk with their children. Nowadays, there are a lot of parents work in double harness, so a lot of them don't have much time to talk with their children and even have time to talk with them, they can not come up with good issue because they are not used to talking with them. But TV program like news and entertaining program are generation-wide, so by just watching it, parents can get a good issue to talk with their children.
Because watching TV has a lot of merits for our lives like I mentioned above , I disagree to the statement that say television has destroy friends and family communication.
Television has been widely shared information sourse and entertaining provider. It can give us common topics to talk about with other people, hints to understand what people think, and good issues for family communicaiton. So I disagree to the statement that say television has destroyed communication amoung friends and family.
Watching soup opera give you a common subject to talk about with your friends. School children can share the idea about having a boyfriend or girlfrien, or putting a make up the way people do in the soap opera that they are talking about. You can feel more conected with your friends by talking the same subject.
Watching TV program with children make their parents know how their children think about what is going on in their lives and their future. Parents can see how their children grew up by watching them give a sympathy or angry to a criminal in news and see what they like by watching them how to react to some sports program or TV commercial.
Watching TV program give a parent a good issue to talk with their children. Nowadays, there are a lot of parents work in double harness, so a lot of them don't have much time to talk with their children and even have time to talk with them, they can not come up with good issue because they are not used to talking with them. But TV program like news and entertaining program are generation-wide, so by just watching it, parents can get a good issue to talk with their children.
Because watching TV has a lot of merits for our lives like I mentioned above , I disagree to the statement that say television has destroy friends and family communication.
posted by yoko at
5:49 PM
2 Comments:
I don't know how u do it but the essay 8 was perfect and 9 was okay, but little clumsy on some vocabs.
Soup opera= soap opera
double harness???- parents both work?
辞書にね、書いてあったの。double harnessって。
単純に書けばよかったのか…
英語(ネイティブ)らしい言い方とかあったら教えてちょ。こんな書き方はしないよぉ見たいなのがあったらさ。それだらけだったりして。陽子がんばる(しくしく)
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