Wednesday, February 01, 2006

Writing Topic 6

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.


My hometown is Yatsushiro, a small agricultural city which is famous for its Tatami(Japanese traditional mat) products. Since the city is remote from big city, my hometown has to face problems such as dicreased population, and shopping arcade that have many closed shops, etc. Making a large factory in a discreaced populated town is considered as one of solutions solve the problem of the small town. In consideration of my hometown, I support making a factory. Although there are demerits from making it but we have to take the risks to make our community prosper.

Advantages that we can get from building a large factory close to our community are a large population, economy growth and the future simble of the community. A large factory needs many poeple to work there, so making a large factory will bring big population to the area it's going to build in. And when there are many people to consume, the economy in the community will grow. And also, the community can use the factory as a simble of it to advertise to other community.

Disadvantages that we can get from building a large factory close to our community are dicreesing workers at small factories those were already there for a long time, pollution in the community and destroying the site that fits to our community. Like I mentioned above, A large factory needs many poeple to work there, so making a large factory will not only bring big population to the area but also take workers from small factories that were already there and make the factories smaller and more weak. It is easy to imagine that a large factory might cause air or water polution in the community and distroy the view of the community because of the large buildings.

When I think about my hometown, making a factory is more effective way to prosper the community. After all, the benefit from making a factory outweigh the dangers such as popution of the air, because we also have modern technology to solve the problem.

1 Comments:

Blogger *fumiko* said...

EXCELLENT!

10:13 AM  

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