Writing Topic 4
It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and cantrast knowledge gained from exparience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
What we learn from our experience are practical things.
we can apply what we learn from our exparience to new things. One of my friends got a waitress job for the first time in her life. She didn't know not only what to do but what the costmers wanted; good services, impression. As she kept doing that job, she began to know what kind of words she had to use to make costmers feel good about the restaurant, and at what situation she should smile to them to give them a good impression. After she gets the whole waitress experience, her character changed in a good way. Now she knows how to make her friends feel good, and she can think about what her friends might want, just like in a way to think about the restaurant's custmers.
we can get more successed cases when we use the knowledge from our experience than when we use the knowledge from books that we have read. A sister of one of my friends is a doctor. When she tries to get a blood sample from one of her patients, the only thing that she thinks about is to get a blood. She palpates the blood vessel and stick a needle in the angle that she thinks it's going to hit the vessel. And most in this kind of cases, she can get blood samples. In the textbook that she used when she was in medical school, it is said that when one tries to get a blood sample, one has to insert the needle in 45 degrees and then pull the inner cylinge tp obtain the blood. But what she says is, nobody has the same shape of blood vessel, depth of
だめだ！！30分じゃ終わんない！
そんなにポンポン良い点が浮かばないから、良い例えも浮かばない…
良い方法はないか…？？？
What we learn from our experience are practical things.
we can apply what we learn from our exparience to new things. One of my friends got a waitress job for the first time in her life. She didn't know not only what to do but what the costmers wanted; good services, impression. As she kept doing that job, she began to know what kind of words she had to use to make costmers feel good about the restaurant, and at what situation she should smile to them to give them a good impression. After she gets the whole waitress experience, her character changed in a good way. Now she knows how to make her friends feel good, and she can think about what her friends might want, just like in a way to think about the restaurant's custmers.
we can get more successed cases when we use the knowledge from our experience than when we use the knowledge from books that we have read. A sister of one of my friends is a doctor. When she tries to get a blood sample from one of her patients, the only thing that she thinks about is to get a blood. She palpates the blood vessel and stick a needle in the angle that she thinks it's going to hit the vessel. And most in this kind of cases, she can get blood samples. In the textbook that she used when she was in medical school, it is said that when one tries to get a blood sample, one has to insert the needle in 45 degrees and then pull the inner cylinge tp obtain the blood. But what she says is, nobody has the same shape of blood vessel, depth of
だめだ！！30分じゃ終わんない！
そんなにポンポン良い点が浮かばないから、良い例えも浮かばない…
良い方法はないか…？？？
posted by yoko at
7:17 PM
2 Comments:
陽ちゃん!
英語を書くには結構慣れてきてるみたいね。FLOWは確かに良くなったよ。でも前に話したこと覚えてる？
Thesis,Conclusion,とBodyの組み合わせ。
それが原点です。多分30分だからあせっちゃうと思うけど、TOEFLは外国人用だからそんなに長く書かなくても要点だけでも抑えていればOKだと思うよ。
とにかく一番大事なのは質問されたことを書くこと。
頑張ってね！
ね、これは練習のためなんだよね。だから、３０分後そのままで終っちゃうだめだと思わない。３０分が過ぎた所にマークして（例えば「ここは３０分」などを書く）で、最後まで続いたらどう？そういう風で全部の部分を練習できるし。
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